The Official Writing Challenge
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08/12/10
I love the humor. A great poem. Not so sure the title fits.
I love it when a poem makes me laugh in the first verse. Your descriptions were priceless I'm not sure if it was totally on the topic. But nevertheless I enjoyed it immensely and could sense the no touching the seat concept.
Great. Funny and well written. Creative Poetry. Must confess I have been using the men's toilet at church lately since there is a big frog in the ladies.
For real....LAUGHING OUT LOUD! This is just too too cute with honesty and spot on descriptions.
08/17/10
The humor is awesome in this poem. Too funny!
I think you speak for every woman. lol. What a funny slice of life you have presented here.

Then... there is that doorknob which many of us open with a sleeve or paper towel in our hands. Why defeat the purpose!

It is on topic in regards to touching or avoiding germs.
This was light-hearted, cute and oh, so real.
So well done--funny, and very true-to-life. Great job!
Congratulations for placing in the top 15 of your level.