The Official Writing Challenge
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Your story brings back memories of my brother; he was a pest too. A nice family story with a moral for Deborah.

There are some rough spots that can easily be smoothed out and reworking the story details would help make a clearer picture. Blessings. :)
This is a lovely story. It might be a little stronger on the smell topic than the touch, but I still could see the touch in there. How wonderful to have such a gentle grandmother.