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This is a light-hearted poem that speaks of the fun side of your nature. You so did not need the warning. I was expecting something horrible and dog poo is just a fact of life and not an explicit word at all. The last few stanzas were great. It gives us such insight into the human psyche.
08/05/10
Perhaps it wasn't even Jay's dog that did it when the lady wasn't looking! :) Fun poem about an all too common problem.
08/05/10
I would say this is delightful, but I'm not sure that's quite the right word for it. LOL
This reminds me of a woman (now deceased) who used to scoop up her neighbors dog's presents and deposit them back on the neighbor's porch. Unfortunately, they never became good friends.
08/10/10
Great poem...leaving the word out made it even funnier. Loved the irony.
Loved the humor in your poem, as well as the message.
08/12/10
This was really funny.You are a master of the funny poem.
08/12/10
Interesting way of describing the aftermath of "a foot in doggy-do". Good take on the topic and a light-heartening treat and read.
08/12/10
Very funny, loved this. Congratulations.