The Official Writing Challenge
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It's definitely an exciting tale. I was a bit confused by the disclaimer at the end, but that could be my tired brain. You pulled the reader in with your excitement and kept me until the end.
a well-written story of how we all dream of our talents and passions being recognized (and rewarded).
I liked your story. Divine appointments are always available if we will just stop and hear what the Spirit is saying!
07/20/10
Just love the way this played out from beginning to end. So very fresh.
Not sure if totally on topic.
So unpredictable and yet very believable.

Mona