The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
I really enjoyed this. I can't imagine what it would be like to leave your young family. I liked the way you did this... like a journal, or blog... very well done and captivating.
09/13/05
Not bad at all. Enjoyable. Thanks!
09/13/05
A journal that gets to the heart of the emotions without being unduly mushy. Good effort.
09/14/05
Very well done. The only suggestion I have is not to assume that your readers are familiar with military jargon. I didn't know what any of the initials meant, for example. Either omit them, or explain them, or find another way to write them. Other than that, very timely and well-written.
09/17/05
Very nicely written. I liked the feel here. Wished it was longer! :-)