The Official Writing Challenge
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On topic and well written. I enjoyed this from beginning to end.
I love the way Nabeeha quietly—she did not argue with her aunt, yet with strong determination she did what needed to be done. A beautiful portrayal of Nabeeha breaking down barriers, not only for herself, but also for future generations.
This is such a fresh view on the topic. I found myself holding my breath. I also enjoyed the peek into another culture.
Very interesting read! I particularly like the ending which shows clearly the kind of encouragement everyone needs to hold on to in looking forward. Your story conveys the meaning of Hosea 4:6 very well&mdah;My people are destroyed for lack of knowledge.
Really original take. Wonderful creativity here.
Congratulations! This had me holding my breath!!
Congratulations on your highly commended. You captured my imagination in this fast-paced story. Nabeeha is a true hero in this story and a pioneer in her culture. Great job.
Oooo, great story. Loved the look at the culture and you did well keeping me on the edge of my seat.