The Official Writing Challenge
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09/12/05
Wait, I think you missed something here. Bon Voyage means GOOD trip. :)
Nevertheless, a captivating story.
09/12/05
Wow, how incrdibly sad. This is a well written piece, but I'm wondering if you could have shown Maggie more heartbroken at the loss of her best friend at the beginning of your article. Maybe a tear... or Anna's face flashing in her mind. Not sure... something to consider.
Thank you for sharing this... wouldn't be suprised if it's in the winners bracket!
09/14/05
Very nice job on capturing the feel of the time period in both your descriptions and your dialog.
09/17/05
Powerful writing... kept my attention the whole way through. Great job leaving it hanging and unresolved. Very good!