The Official Writing Challenge
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Wait, I think you missed something here. Bon Voyage means GOOD trip. :)
Nevertheless, a captivating story.
Wow, how incrdibly sad. This is a well written piece, but I'm wondering if you could have shown Maggie more heartbroken at the loss of her best friend at the beginning of your article. Maybe a tear... or Anna's face flashing in her mind. Not sure... something to consider.
Thank you for sharing this... wouldn't be suprised if it's in the winners bracket!
Very nice job on capturing the feel of the time period in both your descriptions and your dialog.
Powerful writing... kept my attention the whole way through. Great job leaving it hanging and unresolved. Very good!