The Official Writing Challenge
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I like your editor. She's realistic with a sense of humor and seems to really know people. I'd like working for her and I think I'd trust my WIP to her.
Definitely a sympathetic editor! I notice that your story interweaves dialogue and monologue, two very different styles of expression. At a couple of points I felt that the two became a little muddled. It was strange for example to have the editor suddenly talking to herself while still in conversation with her assistant.
But you certainly conveyed the frustrations of working with writers with egos and who of us doesn't struggle with ego?!