The Official Writing Challenge
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Cool story! It was very creative to put it in a play/stage type setting.
I like the references to "I AM" and how He, as "The Reviewer," gave them advice on how to deepen their stories.

I noticed once that "his" was written in reference to Danielle instead of "her." But no big deal.

Great job and very "on topic!"
Creative? Yes. Page turner? No. Girl's name with a boy's story got this reader confused to the point of distraction to the story. However, if ths story's setting was on "Judgement Day", which I believe was stated...then they have no second chance to come back next week...which was also a bit perplexing; but YES, it Was creative, unique and ...different.
I liked this piece because it emphasized that we write for an Audience of One - the great I AM. Clever setting and approach to the topic.
I loved your story about THE REVIEWER and how you brought everything together so perfectly. Very well written and right on point.