The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, trully out of the broken places beauty can come through Christ Jesus. I think there should have been a page break befoe those final 2 paragraphs where the point of view changes. Good job.
This what I call a pow wow! The use of "Love Hurts," and certain literary bridges kept me their through jumps in time.
Very compelling writing. A few missed commas here and there, but the last two paragraphs more than make up for those teeny glitches. Extremely powerful.
This was so powerful. I am thankful for kleenex. Love hurts drew me like a moth to the flames. I've witnessed first hand how abuse can torment a child. I truly enjoyed this. God bless
Intense and powerful! It hurt to even read this, but I'm so thankful and grateful for that healing love of Jesus.
SO powerful. Your voice is just excellent - I felt like I knew her. Wow.
Very powerful and packed with raw emotion. (A little polishing and a few commas required.)
Your story is haunting. Your theme, "Love hurts," is powerful. I wished you had more than 750 words to write with when I came to the end.