The Official Writing Challenge
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The details were great. I could see everything from the MC's eyes.
You did a wonderful job keeping the tone and style of this piece believable for the time and the character. The letter also had an intimate conversational feel, as a sister's letter should. The situations you described seemed so authentic, too. Impressive writing!
Wow, you made feel like I was Lizzie and Meg. I felt privileged as a "confidant" to the writer as I read this.
You transported me to another time, another place. I enjoyed the thoughts relating to race and propriety of the day! This is very good!
I found myself in another world, watching from the sidelines like watching a split screen movie showing both characters at the same time. A wonderful job done of a past time and place.

Through you letter you were able to reveal a great deal about the sisters' characters and the difficulties faced being a missionary in Hawaii.