The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/05
Yes! Oh so right and what a wonderful way to convey this. I could picture this whole scene especially when the mom recieved her postcard. Such a small thing yet so it means the world - can totally relate. Loved very minute of this well written visual!
09/05/05
A good visual presentation. Thanks.
09/09/05
This is very touching; I'd like to see it as a scene from a longer presentation. Reminds me of some professional theater productions I've seen.
Not often do I see this format in the challenges. A very good one. I could see this very thing being acted out on stage. Thanks for sharing!
09/09/05
Interesting. Very well written.
I'm always amazed that someone can fit a skit into the 750 word count and make it work - but you've done just that. However, I can also see this being extended and perhaps having even more impact. Thanks for sharing.
09/11/05
A nice skit, although the costumes might be a challenge for smaller groups - but could be done with some creativity :)