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Nice descriptions with characters and all. It put me their.
Engaging story! I was totally engrossed. I enjoyed the restaurant, the smells, from the seven-year-old, and the contrast to the MC with his own family. ...and then your "Mr. Paul!" and how you unfolded his story. Super creative work on this story. Wonderful writing! Wow!
I enjoyed this so much. You did a great job with your descriptions. I could even imagine the noise from the hustle and bustle inside the restaurant. I was so glad to see Mr. Paul still at the restaurant. I was afraid he'd passed on by the time you returned. :)
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