The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story well told. I really liked that fact that the mouse was thankful too. Nice twist.
You have cleverly woven different perspectives into this, and shown enor-mouse skill. Well done.
The flow of this story was fantastic, the style was totally consistent from start to finish. Awesome!
Neat story. Some editing on punctuation would make this story read a little smoother and clearer; plus improve the chances of it being spoken of as a Masterpiece...thanks for sharing your talent with us.
Cute story - nicely done!
Best mouse/rat/critter story of the week! Loved the style, flow, setting, and the two POV's flowing through.