The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, so sad. Well written, this should be read to a men's group; indeed, I think I will copy it and do just that.
Great entry! Well done in it's message.
sad yet true in many men's lives. I liked the line about footnotes, but wouln't have used it twice. Nice descriptions.
This reminded me of a song that started "the cat's in the cradle . . . I liked that song because it had a good message and so does your entry. I remind myself often of what is really important in life. Keep up the good writing!
I really liked this, great message, well written. God Bless, Karen
Well written! Wakes us up to be responsible for our aging, lonely parents--for we are surely headed there. One of the golden rules rang in mind mind: Do to others what you'd have them do to you.
I would have loved to show that Christ remains the hope of the lonely and abandoned by man.
A touching and well-written vignette.