The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/10
Loved the twist at the end. You need to put in ***** where the scene changes so it's less confusing. Good work in this piece.
I absolutely love this! What a great ending.
02/22/10
Loved this twist! Great job writing.
02/25/10
Nice.
What a hilarious and fantastic twist to this story, great writing