The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/10
Your poem is amazing. The progression is wonderful and consistent with how God seems to work so often in our hearts when we are seeking him. The rhyme and meter are near perfect. Tears started falling at the 5th stanza. The metaphor for "Why?"...hanging suspended in air is brilliant. Thanks for this piece of excellence.
02/15/10
Each stanza deserves meditation
To absorb such splendid revelation:)

So true...formulas, platitudes,advice cannot compare to the anchor that is His Word!

I really love the hope and inspiration found in your last stanza, esp there's glory to be revealed!

Ohhh my! What an expression of loss and then hope. Excellent! I don't write poetry much although I did when I was younger. I look forward to seeing this rank WAY up there! In some stanzas it reads like the Psalms. Great job!
Very nice. This resonated with my soul...