The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellently presented. I like how you went back & forth between Bailey & Cy, letting us see them as they processed; it was totally realistic. I was very satisfied with the ending too. Great job!
I agree...excellent writing. I like the natural lead up to her "ohhh" moment and then resolution. Kudos.
Nicely done. Very nicely done. And so real. Wow. I could picture this so vividly as I read it, as if I was right there. Loved the ending too!
The best description of a marital row I've ever read. So, so typical. I'm glad you brought them to reconciliation at the end.
Ohh...the highs and lows of married life! Very realistic depiction of a "squabble".
Hey Robyn, congrats on placing 12th in the Level 3 with this entry! There are so many talented writers here, so great job! If you haven't already, be sure to check out the Highest Rankings on the boards:
Thank you everyone for your feedback! It is so awesome to have a place to share our creative talents isn't it?

I had to really stretch to write this since I have never had a squabble with my husband...NOT! ;)