The Official Writing Challenge
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At first the heavy description bothered me, but the second half of the story won me over. A great effort. Thanks.
Your story could have gone in so many directions. I really enjoyed where you took this one. A great read.
I figured out where you were going with this - but it was a delightful read. Well done!
Cleverly done. I enjoyed it. Good stuff!
You write "Mary couldn't believe she was having this conversation..." I believe you meant Sarah.? I would have appreciated more strength and emphasis behind the revelation of the mother's true acts of love. A good idea for a story on postcards.
I share Sarah's question. Why wouldn't her mother have shared God's love with Sarah? But I really like the twist you put in this story.
This story was gripping! It's a powerful message that cautions that assumptions can often be wrong. Great writing!