The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/09
This is a very engaging piece, so concise and yet I can picture the park, the chatty little girl, and ADOC so very well. The dialogue was superb and I loved the little actions in between..."another weed,...another piece of trash, pluck pluck," etc. Super job.
11/30/09
Out of the mouths of babes. Enjoyed reading this well-written story.