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I guess in the end there's only one "power tie" that really matters, isn't there. Very good.
Well-written. I enjoyed the dialogue.
Really nice! Keep it up
O! I am so blessed by your story! May there be more Jameses in the workforce or in the world out there shining the love and mercies of God! Speaking boldly for our Lord and Saviour! Keep it up, Brother!
God bless you!
This story is interesting and powerful at the same time. Interesting - Ken reveals his Christianity by saying he's a Sunday School teacher, subtle. I liked how the MC went from the yellow tie to the power of the Son. Good job! Great ending.
Very creative way to use the topic color and teach a good meesage as well. I enjoyed reading this story. Thanks by the way for your kind words about my entry.