The Official Writing Challenge
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11/15/09
This ended differently than I thought it was going to. Very good job:)
I did not see that coming! I had it in my mind that Jean had passed away. Perhaps, in the end, the purple hair was the best medicine and gift he could give.
11/17/09
I loved the ending. It was absolutely perfect. I felt like the middle dragged slightly - the pacing seemed a little slow. Even so, this was a great story with a touching message.
11/19/09
I hate to say it but I COMPLETELY called that ending, but only because it is SO TOTALLY something I would do. This worked fantastically. Grats on placing, it is well deserved. Nice bit of writing here.
11/19/09
Tender and bittersweet with a twist at the end. Well done! Congratulations on your EC!
What a lovely, heartwarming, creative story! Well written with all the necessary details in place. Congratulations on your EC! Well deserved!
11/19/09
I really liked this entry a lot when I first read it. Congratulations on your level win, and your EC.