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I liked this story. The end reminded me of the romantic fiction in Woman's World which isn't a bad thing considering that writing is published. I love the alliteration of the title as well.
Ah, this struck a chord in my romantic heart. Very cute/sweet and well written. Enjoyed the charcter development of your MC. And I'm a sucker for aliteration. :).
I enjoyed your story and the lesson couched within.
Ooh, I love a subtle romance! GREAT ending.
A great piece about how rewarding it can be if we just let Him take care of us.
11/19/09 tell me more, Dear. ;)