The Official Writing Challenge
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11/12/09
Clever take on the subject. Maybe I should have done that. Who knows maybe underneath all of this clutter I too have a purple desk.
11/12/09
You have articulated self-revelation to a whole new level. I like it! From now on when I see purple I will remember to accept my idiosyncrasities for what they are--seems I am in good company.
11/16/09
This was absolutely delightful! I used to work for an attorney who had files piled up, not only on his desk, but in stacks on various parts of the floor in his office. But...he knew where every file and paper was. Love this story! You have placed your title at the top of the body of the story. It is distracting.
11/18/09
Liked this very much. Although the last line in reference to the robe and calvary seemed line a throw away. Overall excellent writing.