The Official Writing Challenge
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Well-done sci-fi. Definitely would like to know more about this setting!
Very imaginative story. It has so many possibilities. Very good writing!
Not bad, there is definitely a lot of potential here. I like the constant stream of conscious thought through your MC. The shopping excursion was lots of fun, I wish there were a few more descriptions, but the it is still a fun read!
This was an awesome story. I really got into it and was disappointed when I reached the end. Although fantasy isn't my favorite genre, I could read this story all day. Have you considered doing more with these fascinating characters and amazing setting?