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Having never heard of the black/white swans, I found the story intriguing. Thanks for the footnote,I was pleased by the happy ending.
A wonderful story and even better, knowing it is true. I have seen black swans here in UK - they are incredibly beautiful!
Well done--thanks for the historical note, and for the epilogue.
in our darkest moments, it's amazing how prayer brings us back to the light. the footnote left me greatly encouraged.
You did a good job touching the heart with such deep feelings. Enjoyed the read.
You "hooked" me immediately and it was easy for me to form strong mental pictures.
I, too, was fascinated by your notes. Your ending filled me with hope. Well done!
I really like how you ended this, and then added the footnote. What encouragement, and what a testimony!
I love how you use the symbol of the black swan to describe your friend's near-death experience. So glad this story had a happy ending!
Kathryn, I'm going to feature this story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of November 9. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Wonderful story of hope and God's faithfulness. Thanks for sharing.
That was beautiful! I love how with man things are impossible but with God all things are possible.
Beautiful and touching. Thank you for sharing.