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Through the descriptions, I could see Mr. Curious swimming in the ocean around the coral. Excellent job weaving the lesson into the story.
Excellent description of the reef, I could see it clearly while reading. Good point to the story as well. Great lesson for Sunday School or Children's Church.
I enjoyed this because it reminded me of an Aaesop's Fable, and I LOVED those as a kid ... and when I read them to my own kids. Great lesson about sin's "disguises."
This had a great moral. I could see it coming, and I wanted to warn him, but he had to make the choice on his own. I think there's a lesson in that too. God sees us headed towards a bad decision, and he wants to warn us, but we have to make the decision on our own.
An excellent read-aloud to children. Engaging, intriguing, and made me curious too!

Thanks for writing this.