The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely story, great twist at the end, excellent writing!
Great word pictures. Perhaps you could have used a pronunciation guide with your title.
This had some great imagery in it. I'm not much of a fisher, but your descriptions carried me straight to the scene. There are some gems of dialogue in here, but a couple of lines seemed a little rough and tripped me up. Overall, excellent.
Now this was a very unique twist to the topic & I enjoyed it completely. Still don't have a clue how to pronounce the title . . .
An ususual but interesting use of the red topic. Very interesting and you must do a bit of this yourself to know so much about it.
Good story, well written - Colin