The Official Writing Challenge
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Spooky! Some great concepts here. Well done!
You successfully created a sense of turbulence, here.

Liked this: "Enjoying the sights?” Mrs. Hoffman seemed to savor Magda’s pain.

“I stopped living by sight a long time ago, Ma’am.”
Oh wow - chilling and well written!
Yikes! I'd like to read a novel based on this creepy concept. Bravo!
BRILLIANT! You write so assuredly that the reader can't help but be pulled into the story. I read some lines over and over again, transfixed by the deeper meanings behind the words. You write with such clarity and precision - to fit such a wealth of characterisation, spiritual meaning and social comment within these word limits while simultaneously unfolding a totally credible futuristic setting is a truly noteworthy achievement. Well done - I was deeply impressed! You have talent!
Tony, you know I'm one of your fans! I'm a bit late letting you know, but your entry was in the semi-finals for the Sightseeing challenge, and did very well. You came in at 10th place overall, so you deserve a pat on the back. Well done (as always). With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)