The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative and enjoyable read. Excellent work!
Very interesting read. Leaves me with something to ponder.
Interesting! You did a good job of filling us in on what we needed of the "back story" without falling into the trap of too much "telling". Still, the reads like part of a larger it in the making?
This is my favorite work of yours, and I am honored that I got to read it in its early version. I am looking forward to reading the re-write. I bet it is even better.