The Official Writing Challenge
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Well this was kinda fun... a prequel to a previous entry. Interesting!
Had I not read the previous entry I would not have been able to follow your story as well. It seems as though you are telling the story in reverse.
Very nice. Reminded me of The Postman movie starring Kevin Costner.

May God bless and keep you writing forever.

Dan Blankenship
Good writing skills, but I did not read the previous entry so I had no idea where it was going or where it had been.
This writing was good but I too was confused since I didn't know the story.