The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a wonderful glimpse through decades of memories, as well as an excellent reminder of the positive impact of serving people, not just going to work.
A lovely, well written story. Thanks be to God for people like your MC who give of themselves to help others.
Very touching story, and unique for this week.

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I love the visual of the bleachers full of people that she had touched.
Aw, a tear-jerker, for sure. I love this feel-good story.
Excellent writing creating a warm and caring MC. Love this touching story.
Held me in rapt suspense but I wanted to hear from Kim...LOL

Great job.
A heart warming story nicely told. Well done!
I loved the beginning of this story. Made me smile even before I got the full picture. The middle part seemed to drag a little bit, and the end might have been helped with an example of a testimony instead of a "telling" paragraph, but for me, an adoptee, this story is precious!
We are adoptive parents and can testify to the fact that God does bring good out of bad.
Congratulations on being Highly Commended for the level with this lovely entry this week.
This tender story captures the reasons why we need more "Rita's" in this world. I'm glad this one was highly commended. Great job.
Simply beautiful. I have tears in my eyes.