The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the image of autumn and summer as sisters. You did a good job highlighting the glories of autumn and paragraph 3 which was my favorite.
I especially liked this piece after the second paragraph. For me it would've been fine to start with... 'Is that melancholy that I feel in the air?'

09/07/09
You touched on all of the things I love about autumn.
09/08/09
What an interesting and unusual approach to the beautiful season of autumn! My mother always said she loved autumn but it always evoked a melancholy response from her, too. She knew that before the season was over, the magnificent maple leaves would die and shrivel up, ushering in the lonely, cold and barren winter. You did a great job of showing the "inside" of autumn with its many facets, just another good example of what a fine writer you are. Many, many kudos!