The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/09
This poem is lovely and delightful! You captured the seasons beautifully, especially fall and winter. Many great lines and thoughts here. Good job!
09/04/09
I enjoyed the circle made in the poem from one autumn to the next. A lovely way to show God's love through all of the seasons.
09/04/09
Beautiful rhyme. Thanks for helping to rhyme away some old thoughts about autumn and winter and paint new pictures of how beautiful these seasons can be. I have returned to my roots in the Midwest after living in the desert for many years.