The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully told with such anticipation and tension. I was on the edge of my seat.
This was an enjoyable read. I like your writing style and everything about this story.
Nicely done. I enjoyed reading this story. It held my attention from start to very satisfying finish.
Very suspenseful beginning...and I loved the tear being used to anoint the baby's head...very good writing!
VERY exciting! One red ink: The first sentence merely tells us what you proceed to show show, and isn't necessary. Cutting it would make a stronger opening to this excellent entry.

I loved your story! Great example of God's miraculous power. Great title also. You did good!