The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely written with a bittersweet ending. Bitter the death but sweet the destination for those who know Christ.
Your piece completely captivated me. Well done.
Whew, just had to catch my breath for a moment & blink back tears. Nicely told. (And I don't want to make a mountain out of a molehill, but I think you meant "peek", not "peak".;-))
Great title, really fine charaterization.

I wish I knew how Cassie died.

This was very readable, and with a real feel for dialect.
A lovely, well-told, bittersweet story. Excellent characterization--well done.