The Official Writing Challenge
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Very good and true to life from a teen's perspective.
I always seem to keep stuff to myself before bursting out with it.
Well written and interesting.
How astute of you to realize how very hard it is to "cut the apron strings." It is something I wrestle with quite often myself. Thanks for a well written story.
Good story, I love how you incorporated the title towards the end. Very touching. The flow was I little choppy and interrupted for me, but I'm sure that was just the spacing from cut and pasting the entry. Good job!