The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job concealing the identity of the officer!
Like the wit and lightheartedness of this piece. Good work!
Well that certainly was a twist and a half. Gives the whole flirtation business a completely different angle. Wow.
Fantastic story. I especially liked the twist at the end. GREAT WORK.
Congratulations on your first place win. I enjoyed reading the story. At first I thought the police officer was her husband. It was quite touching to realize it was her son, and why she was so proud of him for givingher a ticket.
This is a wonderful story, wonderfully told. What at twist, I didn't see it coming. Congratulations on your EC - it is well deserved.
Congratulations on your EC as well as your level placing.
Congratulations on your 1st place and EC. I wasn't expecting the ending...loved it!
Well, that was a surprise ending! I didn't catch on by the title, but it was a very unique point of view to becoming an adult. Bet that Mama kept that ticket FRAMED for a long time....You brought out the funny side of a not-so-funny topic...Well told....And congratulations on FIRST place...Blessings...Helen
awesome! Thanks for making me laugh.. great twist.