The Official Writing Challenge
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I’m not sure how the paragraphs (and sentences) got jumbled in the posting, but other than that, I really like this entry. Raw, serious inflection that I could completely relate to made me wonder why I had not written something like this before. That’s the sign of good writing; when another writer says, “Man, wish I had written that!”

I love this part: “The ten years before, I just worked. I just lived without being aware of my living.” AWESOME work right there! Definitely, the two best sentences in this week’s competition. Great job!

May God bless and keep you writing always!
08/13/09
Every year older is a place we haven't been before. Well done piece.