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I enjoyed the MC's voice in this piece.
I love this. Very good job writing your analogy. I love the quirkiness of your MC. Very, very good:)
I love the line about the bugs expecting to get some light but end up getting fried by a false light. Some good stuff in here! But I would expect no less from you, my Southern porch friend!
I like the understated style of this. My favourite line is "I bet they wouldn't like it if I called them bugs". Just about sums up how Christians are called to take all kinds of flack and not retaliate! I like your descriptions of how hot can be really too much too. Been there!
Loved the creative way you formated this. It was very well done. The buzz and the creak, etc. made this come alive. Nicely done.
Rachel, I'm going to feature this extremely creative story on the Front Page Showcase for the week of April 26. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
This is really excellent! Love the way you used the symbolism to illustrate strong Spiritual concepts. And I too, loved the narrator's voice. A very engaging story with a good message.