The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
True message in your poem!Thanks for sharing.
Loved the repetition of RETREAT TO ADVANCE! Lots of meat in that thought!
08/10/05
Excellent idea and prose.
08/11/05
I liked the verse that contained all the scriptural examples like Jesus and Esther.
08/11/05
I was hoping that the topic "retreat" would bring back our poets! I love this writing! Very nice!
08/12/05
Parts of this poem showed great poetic promise, occassionally the style wained. Good effort and attention to subject.
08/15/05
Retreat to advance. It sounds like a healthy motto. Helga