The Official Writing Challenge
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A great idea. I love how you charted her life throughout the years with each important incident. The ending left me with a feeling of disappointment for the lady. I hope becoming old is not so bad!! Very creative - well done.
I like how you chronicled the phases of this lady's life. However, I felt depressed for her at the end.
Oh, my gosh, this is me! Except that I'm trying to trash, give away, sell and otherwise dispose of three households smothering me with 'stuff.' I do not want to end up like you MC! Well-written story.
Very well told indeed. I liked the rhythm of the writing, the parallelism of the various stages of her life. And you brought out superbly the futility of amassing earthly wealth. This would be an excellent devotional on Jesus' teaching about storing up your treasures in heaven.