The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/09
This touched a chord. I suspect such questioning is very common among believers, and all too often we are afraid to admit to it for fear others will think we are back sliding or blaspheming. You were very brave to write like this.

May I suggest you break up your writing more. It is very off putting looking at a solid block of text, and I fear many people will have opened this but not read it, being put off by how it looks on the page. Then they miss an important entry. Use plenty of paragraph breaks to add white space and make it easier to read.

Keep writing; you have a real message to share.