The Official Writing Challenge
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I was intrigued about who or what the narrator was. This kept me reading!
05/22/09
Very interesting and kept my curiosity as to who the MC was until almost the end--then I guessed it correctly.
I did find a few mis-spelled words--so do proofread and use spellcheck. Other than that, this was right on topic--good job.
I like the descriptions and symbolism here. Nice job!