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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 3 - Advanced)
Topic: Passport (07/25/05)
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Date
Karen Ward
08/02/05
A great comment on the agony of those of us whose loved ones walk away from the truth, and our everlasting hope.
Beth Muehlhausen
08/03/05
A touching story of relationship and hope. Well developed, intense, and meaningful. Good job!
Nina Phillips
08/03/05
So far I think this is my favorite entry. Very heartfelt, and I liked the glimmer of hope at the end. I can relate to the distance of family members initiated by our relationship with Christ. God bless ya, littlelight
terri tiffany
08/04/05
I really enjoyed reading this. I was so happy to see the picture of hope you wrote because so many times we don't know for sure the hearts of our family members.
Julianne Jones
08/05/05
One of those pieces that touch the emotions. Felt relieved when the ending left a sliver of hope. Well done.

Joanne Malley
08/05/05
Very nicely done...enjoyed! We surely don't ever know the destiny of another by actions alone. There is always hope. :)
Maxx . 
08/05/05
Definately a top 8 contender. Very well crafted. Great use of the theme. Good work!
Amy Michelle Wiley 
08/06/05
ooo, I love the hopeful ending, without being too sappy!
Shari Armstrong 
08/06/05
A well written story - good descriptions -and a touch of hope.
Sally Hanan
08/06/05
Enjoyably realistic and well crafted emotions and descriptions.
Linda Watson Owen
08/07/05
Makes me want to know 'the rest of the story'!
Sandra Petersen
08/08/05
Oh, my!! This story is so good! It's hard enough to be labeled a Jesus freak by a sibling a couple of years older or younger that has chosen a wrong path, but to know the twin you grew up with and shared so much with is now mocking you? Tightly crafted and no words wasted...very good!
Dixie Phillips
08/08/05
One of my favorites! A top contender indeed!
Suzanne R
08/08/05
One of my favourites too. Apart from the main message, which was great (the searching for meaning to life, I believe, with the contrast between the narrator and the brother), I really enjoyed the travelogue. Well done!
Debbie OConnor
08/09/05
Whew! That was GREAT! Val, I love this piece. The twins, the description, the ending with their secret tactile code. Awesome work.