The Official Writing Challenge
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Great message here! Pure Truth with comical phrases to delight the reader. The poem itself had some really good stanza's..and others that didn't rhyme as smooth; but all in all a delightful poem with lots of "Good Common Sense." I enjoyed it immensely, since I can empathize with this writer fully. Nice job!
I liked your poem. A little shaky here and there with the cadence and rhyme, but overall, it was a good read. I liked the message of the poem as well.
Yours is an easy one to identify with. You do a good job of putting it into words.