The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/09
This poem brought tears to my eyes as I thought about my own sister and the hard times we have endured over the years. Life is too short to squabble and you've made this very clear in your entry. Great job, really loved this.
05/05/09
You did a great job with the cadence and rhythm in the poem. Throw in a strong message on forgiveness and you have a powerful poem. Well done!
Powerful message beautifully cloaked in poetry. Well done and congratulations on your EC placement.
05/07/09
I've had a difficult time with one of my sisters, so this well-written poem really resonated with me. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR EC!! :)
05/08/09
This was powerful and lovely. Very well done. Congrats on your EC!
Excellent, excellent poem. I loved this sad message. I have faith the mother knew her prayers were answered from Heaven. Great!