The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! Very imaginative with a powerful, un-preachy message. Nice job.
A lovely, thought provoking story.
Tragic but introspective. I believe this to be true: "I heard once, that it’s possible to die of a broken heart long before your body dies. I never imagined how close to the truth that came."

Nostalgic and poignant, leading down a trail of sadness and unknowing. Past Ports--befitting title. Very nice entry.
God bless ya, littlelight
An interesting approach to the prompt.
This was touching and well written. Has a good chance to place. Good work!
A touching, very creative story.
Wow - very touching!
Very moving piece!
An evocative story. I was a little confused at the beginning with: 'The dates were old, way before she could remember' and with the mother reference at the end. If you expanded this think about some foreshadowing/explanation of that.