The Official Writing Challenge
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I could feel the anxiety, the relief, the joy! Well done.
My favorite line is "a sermon Ken could hear with his heart". Well done!
I loved this story--and suspense, and intrique, and the blessed end. Very nice, clap! clap!,
God bless ya, littlelight
Absolutely beautiful! It reminds us to appreciate our freedom to read and have our own copy of "God's personal love letter".
Wow! What a ride! Thank you for taking us along to experience the danger of those who risk their lives for the sake of putting God's Word into hearts of those waiting so desperately. Good jod!
Bravo! Yeah God and you for sharing the story so well! Excellent!
Thank God for the strength and bravery of those individuals. Nicely penned as usual. :)
You've inspired me to remember the Bible 'smugglers' in prayer again! Great telling!
Awesome!!! God is good! well told :)
Wow! Great story and well-written. Even better for being true. Thanks for sharing.
I just love true stories! You did a great job at sharing yours!
Well written. Very good drama. Good pacing throughout. The only thing I didn't like was this line: "The trip ultimately found a conclusion with Ken returning home a different man." I would rather be shown the change then told that it happened.
'Sermon Ken could hear with his heart.'I liked that line too. Just an ordinary bloke - a deli clerk - doing something extraordinary. Well done.