The Official Writing Challenge
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A song. Yes! Congrats on getting the courage to submit a song/poem. This is just besautiful and it flows so artistically. You do have a way with descriptions and impact. I enjoyed reading this and wondered as I read it if it was indeed meant to be a song. I was happy to see your instructions for meter and tune. I write songs as well, and this is truly inspirational. Lord bless you and praise God that His son was lifted up so we may be be too.
Reading this poem/song around Easter just seems to fit so well. :) It is written well and it is wonderful the way you were able to get "the whole story" in. Thanks for sharing!
Very nice work on these song lyrics, beginning with your title. What a contrast.